Thursday, October 23, 2008

Eric Caraballo

English

Ms. Mellvil

October 21, 2008

Animal Farm

You know something it was very strange me how they accepted Napoleon’s lies. But I do know why they still accepted his horrible lies one reason is because he always sugar coated everything that he said, one example every time something bad happened to Napoleon they blamed it on Snowball even though it was all his fault. Another reason is because over half of the animals in the farm which includes the pigs are clueless, the reason that I say this is because they don’t know how to read, write or do almost anything by themselves which makes them a little to dependent on others. Another reason why I think they believe napoleons lies is because they are afraid of his dogs cause in the story there where a couple of tired animals and they got up as soon as Napoleon’s dogs started barking.

1 comment:

Constitution Melville said...

Very good yellows for this paragraph, Eric. Each one gives a separate, clear reason.

Your reds need to be more specific, and you needed quotes!